German: Absicherungsinstrument English translation: rephrase 
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Bus/Financial - Insurance | | German term or phrase: Absicherungsinstrument | Mit dem Abschluss der Wunschpolice, eine spezielle Tarifkombination der [insurance company] für Sie als Kunde der [financial advisors], haben Sie ein flexibles Absicherungsinstrument für sich und Ihre Familie erworben, welches Sie durch alle kommenden Lebensphasen begleiten wird!
Not hedging here, say I. |
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You're quite right about hedging - that's not what it's about here.
I'd rephrase it and say something like:
Concluding a ... policy ........... allows you to protect yourself and your family ......
I think that makes it sound a bit more natural.
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Note added at 19 mins (2007-01-23 23:03:48 GMT)
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Make that .... allows you to flexibly protect .... |
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 Alison Riddell
Germany
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Explanation:
You're quite right about hedging - that's not what it's about here.
I'd rephrase it and say something like:
Concluding a ... policy ........... allows you to protect yourself and your family ......
I think that makes it sound a bit more natural.
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Note added at 19 mins (2007-01-23 23:03:48 GMT)
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Make that .... allows you to flexibly protect ....
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