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Marketing - Marketing / Market Research | | German term or phrase: Strahlkraft entwickeln | Durch ein ideal auf die Branche abgestimmtes Werbe- und Marketingkonzept entwickelt die
AGRARIA eine besondere Strahlkraft – auch über die Grenzen Österreichs hinaus.
Due to an advertising and marketing concept which is ideally adjusted to the industry the AGRARIA develops a special attraction - reaching far beyond the borders of Austria??.
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|  martina1974KudoZ activityQuestions: 3540 ( 18 open) ( 25 without valid answers) ( 20 closed without grading) Answers: 11
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| | English translation:radiates that 'special something' | Explanation:
Re. your translation:
I'd omit "developed", especially in the present tense! (the use of the present tense in such context is very German).
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Note added at 20 mins (2011-10-20 06:56:24 GMT)
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or, if you want to use 'develop', say sth like:
managed to develop the ability to radiate that special something
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lirka
Local time: 18:56
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16 mins confidence:   peer agreement (net): +2 radiates that 'special something'
Explanation:
Re. your translation:
I'd omit "developed", especially in the present tense! (the use of the present tense in such context is very German).
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Note added at 20 mins (2011-10-20 06:56:24 GMT)
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or, if you want to use 'develop', say sth like:
managed to develop the ability to radiate that special something
| lirka
Local time: 18:56
Works in field
Native speaker of:  English, Slovenian
PRO pts in category: 12
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5 hrs confidence: peer agreement (net): +3 has a (special) magnetism
Explanation:
I was thinking "a special sparkle," but the alliteration strikes me as too trite. Definitely get rid of "develop," as zirka says. And some other changes would be good, along the lines of:
Agraria's advertising and marketing concept, which is ideally suited to the industry, has a special magnetism that reaches far beyond the borders of Austria.
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Note added at 5 hrs (2011-10-20 12:09:06 GMT)
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I'm sorry, "lirka," not "zirka." Zirka is somebody else. :-)
| Susan Welsh
United States
Local time: 18:56
Specializes in field
Native speaker of:  English
PRO pts in category: 4
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