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06:57 Jan 10, 2012
German to English translations [PRO] Marketing - Marketing / Market Research
German term or phrase:Getränkeabholmarkt
Zusätzlich zur Auslieferung hat die Brauerei XX auch einen Getränkeabholmarkt
im Messegelände Ost, vis-à-vis der Halle 8, mit Bier, Limonaden, Fruchtsäften, Pago und Mineralwasser eingerichtet
Apart from the delivery service the brewery XX has opened a cash & carry shop for beverages in the Exhibition Centre East opposite hall 8, which offers beer, lemonades, fruit juices, Pago juices and mineral water.?
Explanation: In this particular context you could say that the brewery has opened its own shop:
"As well as its delivery service, the XX brewery has opened a shop at the Exhibition Centre East, opposite hall 8, which sells beer, lemonades, fruit juices, Pago juice and mineral water."
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"As well as its delivery service, the XX brewery has opened a shop at Exhibition Centre East, opposite hall 8, which sells beer, lemonades, fruit juices, Pago juice and mineral water."
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Limonade im Sinne von Sprudelgetränken sollte "sodas" oder "soft drinks" (obwohl die bereits Säfte mit einschließen) sein. "Lemonade" bezeichnet eher die klassische Variate aus Wasser, Zucker und Zitronensaft...
that we really don't have any such shops in England. Perhaps they have such shops/stores in the USA, but I can't confirm that either way. The only shops we have that specialise in drinks/beverages are off licenses, which are nothing like a German Getränkeabholmarkt, even though they don't exclusively sell alcoholic beverages.
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18 mins confidence: peer agreement (net): -1
self-service depot/market
Explanation: Your solution is just fine, Martina - here's an alternative
I don't think you need to repeat the "drinks" since it's obvious.
Ramey Rieger Local time: 00:56 Specializes in field Native speaker of: English PRO pts in category: 30
Explanation: I would use this in the context given. Although not an established term per se, this makes a nice contrast to the delivery service previously mentioned. Exhibitors can either have drinks delivered or collect their own.
"As well as their delivery service, Brewery XX has now opened a collect-your-own drinks store..... providing (or selling, NOT OFFERING) beer, lemonade, fruit juices etc."
Jeux de Mots Germany Local time: 00:56 Specializes in field Native speaker of: English PRO pts in category: 24
Explanation: Ich würde es einfach und neutral halten, insbesondere da wahrscheinlich mehr Wasser als Bier verkauft wird...
Vielleicht "outlet shop"
Außerdem würde ich sagen "the brewery is operating a shop" anstelle "opened", da es wohl weniger eine Geschäftseröffnung ist, sondern nur für die Messe betrieben wird.
Birgit Gläser Germany Local time: 00:56 Native speaker of: German PRO pts in category: 8
Explanation: In this particular context you could say that the brewery has opened its own shop:
"As well as its delivery service, the XX brewery has opened a shop at the Exhibition Centre East, opposite hall 8, which sells beer, lemonades, fruit juices, Pago juice and mineral water."
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Delete "the":
"As well as its delivery service, the XX brewery has opened a shop at Exhibition Centre East, opposite hall 8, which sells beer, lemonades, fruit juices, Pago juice and mineral water."
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Bitte schön, gern geschehen!
David Williams Local time: 00:56 Native speaker of: English PRO pts in category: 12
The translation workplace 
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