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English translation: another attempt
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|  Selected response from: Nicole Tata United Kingdom Local time: 16:25 | ||||||
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sentence Explanation: So far a first - tainted admittedly by those many Western films during my childhood - impression of Afghanistan, the land of the Taliban, of Osama Bin Laden and of the new war against terrorism and for the freedom of the west. I think you need dashes here and not commas.... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2003-01-03 07:17:44 (GMT) -------------------------------------------------- So far a first impression - tainted admittedly by those many Western films during my childhood - of Afghanistan, the land of the Taliban, of Osama Bin Laden and of the new war against terrorism and for the freedom of the west. Maybe put \"impression\" before the dash, makes it a bit clearer... |
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peer agreement (net): +4another attempt Explanation: So much for a first impression of Afghanistan, land of the Taliban, of Osama bin Laden, of the new fight against terrorism and for freedom in the West, an impression which – admittedly – is heavily influenced by the many Westerns I watched as a child. hope it helps |
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