Agree 12:21 Aug 14, 2011
I agree with opolt. As a native English speaker, I have myself written some original texts about joint marketing measures. Appearance or presentation are not necessarily wrong, but I don't think they sound catchy or ideal. Joint marketing presence sounds good to me, but at the same time, it feels like we could use a little more context. It may even make the English version flow better, resembling the German original, if you dropped the presence and wrote: Joint activities, joint marketing, joint investments, provided that the context does not suggest that Auftritt refers to anything else in addition to marketing. |