Éji órán, a harangnál, áldozatkor ott várlak én.

English translation: Where the offering is made and the bell tolls//For you there at night I shall wait

12:59 Apr 8, 2008

Hungarian to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / opera

Hungarian term or phrase: Éji órán, a harangnál, áldozatkor ott várlak én.

A mondatot magyarul sem biztos, hogy jól értelmezem, de a harang feltehetőleg harangozást jelent. Az áldozat is kérdéses, mert utalhat a pogány áldozatra, de a keresztén istentisztelet áldozására is. (Mondjuk harang + áldozás, az inkább katolikus mise).
Az én változatom:
"I will expecting you when the curch bell //
is rung to herald a night mass."
Nem igazán tudtam jobbat kitalálni, de ez sem tetszik. Van rá ötletetek? (37 + 37 karakter a maximum)

Balázs Sudár
Hungary

English translation:Where the offering is made and the bell tolls//For you there at night I shall wait

Explanation:
Csak tipp. Nem számoltam meg, hány karakter, bocsi!

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Note added at 43 perc (2008-04-08 13:42:17 GMT)
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Ill. felcserélhető: where the bell tolls and the offering is made
for you there i shall wait

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Note added at 43 perc (2008-04-08 13:42:36 GMT)
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made után vessző

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valderby
Local time: 05:46

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Mindenkinek köszönöm a válaszokat. Kissé átszabva ez a változat illet legjobban a szövegbe.
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Summary of answers provided

5 +3

Where the offering is made and the bell tolls//For you there at night I shall wait

valderby

4 +2

I'll be waiting for you by the bell for midnight mass.

Katarina Peters

At the midnight hour of communion//I will be expecting you at the bell-tower.

Bernadett Horváth

Discussion entries: 4

Answers

15 mins confidence:

At the midnight hour of communion//I will be expecting you at the bell-tower.

Explanation:
Csak ötlet, akár része is segíthet.

Bernadett Horváth
Hungary
Local time: 05:46
Native speaker of:

Hungarian

32 mins confidence:

peer agreement (net): +2

I'll be waiting for you by the bell for midnight mass.

Explanation:
további ötlet.

Katarina Peters
Canada
Local time: 23:46
Specializes in field
Native speaker of:

Hungarian,

English
PRO pts in category: 16

41 mins confidence:

peer agreement (net): +3

Where the offering is made and the bell tolls//For you there at night I shall wait

valderby
Local time: 05:46
Native speaker of:

Hungarian
PRO pts in category: 8

Grading comment

Mindenkinek köszönöm a válaszokat. Kissé átszabva ez a változat illet legjobban a szövegbe.

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