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l’eccellenza del vino è il frutto dell’amore per la terra

English translation: the excellence of our wine is the fruit of our love for the land


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Italian term or phrase:l’eccellenza del vino è il frutto dell’amore per la terra
English translation:the excellence of our wine is the fruit of our love for the land
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08:05 Sep 14, 2010
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Wine / Oenology / Viticulture
Italian term or phrase: l’eccellenza del vino è il frutto dell’amore per la terra
Slogan iniziale di una newsletter che tratta di vino biologico e biodinamico.

Uno dei miei tanti tentativi è stato:

"love the earth as yourself to create a perfect wine"

Qualcuno ha qualche idea migliore?
Fabiana Rosat
Local time: 06:06
the excellence of our wine is the fruit of our love for the land
Explanation:
I would keep the fruit metaphor, since this is about wine and therefore grapes!

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Note added at 5 mins (2010-09-14 08:10:57 GMT)
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(and your paraphrase, if you decide to stick with in, would need to start out something like this: "love the earth as you love yourself")
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Sarah Elizabeth Cree
Italy
Local time: 06:06
Grading comment
Thanks!
Most of the times I tend to be too creative and I don't choose the easiest option. That's why I love to compare my ideas here in proz. I always find excellent people!
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
4 +1the excellence of our wine is the fruit of our love for the land
Sarah Elizabeth Cree
4(an) excellent wine comes from (the fruit of) our love for the land.
Nicoletta Corradi
4superb wine springs from a love of the landEileen Cartoon
3Excellent wine comes from respecting the landBrannigan
3a great wine (only) comes from love of/for the land
cynthiatesser


  

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4 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
Excellent wine comes from respecting the land


Explanation:
I know Fruits of our Labour and similar expressions are probably going to crop up here (couldn't resist) but I always appreciate simple writing. No puns, no complicated sentences, just a clear message.

Brannigan
Italy
Local time: 06:06
Native speaker of: English
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3 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
the excellence of our wine is the fruit of our love for the land


Explanation:
I would keep the fruit metaphor, since this is about wine and therefore grapes!

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Note added at 5 mins (2010-09-14 08:10:57 GMT)
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(and your paraphrase, if you decide to stick with in, would need to start out something like this: "love the earth as you love yourself")

Sarah Elizabeth Cree
Italy
Local time: 06:06
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 8
Grading comment
Thanks!
Most of the times I tend to be too creative and I don't choose the easiest option. That's why I love to compare my ideas here in proz. I always find excellent people!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  BdiL: Semplice e completo, anche se apparentemente è lungo. Also agree on the paraphrase (the original sounds like translated Italian). M.
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58 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
superb wine springs from a love of the land


Explanation:
just another suggestion

Eileen Cartoon
Local time: 06:06
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
a great wine (only) comes from love of/for the land


Explanation:
My suggestion

cynthiatesser
Italy
Local time: 06:06
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Native speaker of: Native in ItalianItalian
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6 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
(an) excellent wine comes from (the fruit of) our love for the land.


Explanation:
my translation

Nicoletta Corradi
United Kingdom
Local time: 05:06
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in ItalianItalian
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