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企画本部経営企画部長

English translation: General Manager, Corporate Planning Department, Planning Division

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Japanese term or phrase:企画本部経営企画部長
English translation:General Manager, Corporate Planning Department, Planning Division
Entered by: Katalin Horváth McClure

02:27 Jul 7, 2002
Japanese to English translations [PRO]
Bus/Financial
Japanese term or phrase: 企画本部経営企画部長
What is the best translation for this title?
This is in a list of names with titles. (I need a few more, there will be more questions.)
Katalin Horváth McClure
United States
Local time: 09:00
General Manager, Management Dept., Corporate Planning Division
Explanation:
General Manager, Management (Planning) Dept., Corporate Planning Division

or

Management Dept. General Manager, Corporate Planning Division

I believe that Planning can be omitted for the Dept. because it's part of the Corporate Planning Division.

Again, my Imidas dictionary says Division is above Dept.
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mkj (X)
United States
Local time: 06:00
Grading comment
I decided to use General Manager, Corporate Planning Department, Planning Division.
Thank you all.
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Summary of answers provided
4 +1General Manager, Corporate Planning Division, Planning Headquarters
Nobuo Kawamura
4General Manager, Management Dept., Corporate Planning Division
mkj (X)


  

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General Manager, Corporate Planning Division, Planning Headquarters


Explanation:
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Nobuo Kawamura
Japan
Local time: 22:00
Native speaker of: Native in JapaneseJapanese
PRO pts in pair: 483

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General Manager, Management Dept., Corporate Planning Division


Explanation:
General Manager, Management (Planning) Dept., Corporate Planning Division

or

Management Dept. General Manager, Corporate Planning Division

I believe that Planning can be omitted for the Dept. because it's part of the Corporate Planning Division.

Again, my Imidas dictionary says Division is above Dept.



    Reference: http://www.hitachi.co.jp/outline/organization/index.html
    Reference: http://global.hitachi.com/Int-e/org.html
mkj (X)
United States
Local time: 06:00
PRO pts in pair: 159
Grading comment
I decided to use General Manager, Corporate Planning Department, Planning Division.
Thank you all.
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