в коробке уютной, где... девушка вечерами ждет его с горячим ужином

English translation: In a box that's cozy, where "the-not-quite" girl waits for him in the evenings with a steaming supper ready

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Russian term or phrase:в коробке уютной, где... девушка вечерами ждет его с горячим ужином
English translation:In a box that's cozy, where "the-not-quite" girl waits for him in the evenings with a steaming supper ready
Entered by: Alina Mamlyuk

08:42 Dec 7, 2004
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Russian term or phrase: в коробке уютной, где... девушка вечерами ждет его с горячим ужином
Мне казалось, он живет в коробке. Коробке уютной, где "не слишком" девушка вечерами ждет его с горячим ужином, и на работе его поощряют хорошими бонусами, и два раза в год он ездит отдыхать в "правильные" места, но через щели задувает пронизывающий до костей ветер тоски.
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Explanation:
In a box that's cozy, where "the-not-quite" girl waits for him in the evenings with a steaming supper ready, where...and so on, and so forth.....

The sentence right prior to this one ends "in a box." And then I think you should pick up with re-iteraing those three words again, the way I've translated above because that preserves the stream-of-consciousness feel of the narrative.
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Alina Mamlyuk
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Thank you, Alina!
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Summary of answers provided
5 +2in a cozy box, where... the girl has a hot dinner waiting for him every evening.
Kevin Kelly
5literal below
Alina Mamlyuk
3in a comfortable apartment, where a girl waits for him with hot dinner
Tsogt Gombosuren


  

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15 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +2
в коробке уютной, где... девушка вечерами ждет его с горячим ужином
in a cozy box, where... the girl has a hot dinner waiting for him every evening.


Explanation:
Or: ...the girl awaits him every evening with a warm dinner.....

Kevin Kelly
Local time: 02:34
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Native speaker of: English
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Olga Vlasova
6 hrs
  -> Thank you, Olga.

agree  Сергей Лузан: Or: ...the girl awaits him every evening with a hot /(warmed) dinner
15 hrs
  -> Thank you, Sergei.
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17 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
в коробке уютной, где... девушка вечерами ждет его с горячим ужином
in a comfortable apartment, where a girl waits for him with hot dinner


Explanation:
IMHO

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Note added at 18 mins (2004-12-07 09:01:39 GMT)
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every evening

Tsogt Gombosuren
Canada
Local time: 00:34
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Native speaker of: Native in MongolianMongolian
PRO pts in category: 23
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2 days 3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
в коробке уютной, где... девушка вечерами ждет его с горячим ужином
literal below


Explanation:
In a box that's cozy, where "the-not-quite" girl waits for him in the evenings with a steaming supper ready, where...and so on, and so forth.....

The sentence right prior to this one ends "in a box." And then I think you should pick up with re-iteraing those three words again, the way I've translated above because that preserves the stream-of-consciousness feel of the narrative.

Alina Mamlyuk
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in RussianRussian
PRO pts in category: 23
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Thank you, Alina!
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