17:46 Apr 9, 2007 |
Russian to English translations [PRO] Art/Literary - Idioms / Maxims / Sayings / Bible sqying | |||||||
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The monster is huge, disgusting, corpulent, a-hundred-throats and barking Explanation: Я вообще надеялся, что Юрий сам даст вариант, поскольку он первым собственно прояснил ситуацию. Думаю, эпитеты можно и другие постараться поподбирать. |
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A horrible monster, misshapen, vast, with a hundred jaws, and barking. Explanation: A horrible monster, misshapen, vast, with a hundred (gaping) jaws, (and) barking. По аналогии с описанием Цербера у Вергилия: "A horrible monster, misshapen, vast, whose only eye had been put out." http://etext.library.adelaide.edu.au/b/bulfinch/thomas/b93fa... "Стозевно" указывает на наличие у Цербера ста голов, хотя в большинстве источников говорится, что у него было только три головы. (http://thanasis.com/cerberus.htm) |
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The huge monster was hideous and malformed. It was gnashing its teeth and growling. Explanation: The huge monster was hideous and malformed. It was gnashing its teeth and growling. 1. Some of the adjectives are a matter of taste. This is my verion. 2. Since English just cannot do some of the things Russian can, making two sentences here will actually work better. 3. As for ghashing its teeth and growling, that's what monsters more fearsome than just barking and I think gets at what is going on with the jaws. ..or go look for some standardized description ... in English. |
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