факторами, определившими необходимость использования

English translation: caused вместо determined. А так ничего.

07:44 Mar 4, 2004
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Russian term or phrase: факторами, определившими необходимость использования
... стали решающими факторами, определившими необходимость использования IBM eServer xSeries 450 на базе процессора Intel Itanium 2 в коммерческом режиме

Если можно, перевод всей фразы выше. Вот мой вариант, но тут что-то не так, может можно как-то поменять:

... served as the key factors which determined the necessity of using IBM eServer xSeries 450 based on Intel Itanium 2 processor in commercial mode.
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English translation:caused вместо determined. А так ничего.
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Summary of answers provided
5у Вас нормально.
Margarita
4 +1decisive instead of key
Сергей Лузан
4caused вместо determined. А так ничего.
Yuri Smirnov
4became crusial in necessitating..+
nuclear
4см. ниже
Boris Popov
4became the decisive factors determining th need to use / implement
Dorene Cornwell
4factors which substantiated the need for...
Valeri Serikov
3deciding factors in favor of (the use of)...
Nik-On/Off


  

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12 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
факторами, определившими необходимость использования
caused вместо determined. А так ничего.


Explanation:
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Yuri Smirnov
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Спасибо, Юрий!
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факторами, определившими необходимость использования
у Вас нормально.


Explanation:
key factors which determined - это используемое выражение

Margarita
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29 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
decisive instead of key


Explanation:
determined is OK, but specified or stipulated could be other alternatives. Good luck, Demo!

Сергей Лузан
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agree  Alex Zelkind (X)
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факторами, определившими необходимость использования
became crusial in necessitating..+


Explanation:
+the use of IBM eS xS450 based on dual processor II2 in the commercial mode.
В принципе та же фигня, но читается легче... Да и артикль
не помешает :).

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см. ниже


Explanation:
Я бы перевел так:
The following key (vital, decision-making, whatever...) factors determined the need for deployment and commercial use/operation of an IBM eServer xSeries 450 server powered by Intel Itanium 2...

Commercial mode и non-commercial mode, ИМХО, бывает только у программных продуктов. Железо - оно или работает, или не работает :)




Boris Popov
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факторами, определившими необходимость использования
deciding factors in favor of (the use of)...


Explanation:
The financial benefits are often the deciding factors in favor of this choice
www.poughkeepsieruralcemetery.org/buriallots-lawncrypts.htm

flexibility, ease of installation and administration,
scalability and cost were the deciding factors in favor of CRYPTOCard
www.healthmgttech.com/archives/h0502security.htm

but the advantage of central location and general accessibility were deciding factors in favor of Ozark
www.rootsweb.com/~moccl/CCMo1st100/cc_chapter1_2.htm


Nik-On/Off
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became the decisive factors determining th need to use / implement


Explanation:
became the decisive factors determining th need to use / implement the IBM eSeries 450 based on the Intel Itanium 2 for commercial service





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Note added at 2004-03-04 19:26:03 (GMT)
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in commercial mode also seems fine

Dorene Cornwell
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факторами, определившими необходимость использования
factors which substantiated the need for...


Explanation:
Это так, разнообразия для:)

Valeri Serikov
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neutral  nuclear: ...substantiated the need - это когда the need уже был[а], нет?
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