18:08 Feb 17, 2008 |
Russian to English translations [PRO] Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature | |||||||
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odin variant Explanation: odin variant ...a dream had already been born and had remained hidden deep inside my soul, a dream to be in America, travel around Canada... |
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a dream had taken root and lay buried deep in his/her soul Explanation: Or active: he/she had conceived a hope which lay buried deep in his/her soul -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 8 mins (2008-02-17 18:17:14 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Sorry, it's "my soul" etc. |
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had taken shape and was hiding in Explanation: the dream to be in ........had already taken shape and was hiding in the depths of his soul. |
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a dream had sprang up and lay dormant in the back of my mind Explanation: . -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 32 мин (2008-02-17 18:41:45 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- a dream of visiting America and traveling around Canada had sprung up and lay dormant in the back of my mind that's better now |
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had already been born and lay hidden deep in my heart Explanation: I like the literal translation of родилась myself. |
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