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English translation: white teeth with a yellow tinge


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20:03 Jan 6, 2012
Russian to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature
Russian term or phrase: белые с желтоватым отливом зубы
показав белые с желтоватым отливом зубы, она улыбнулась.

A guy describes a girl who is lying in bed beside him as he wakes up after partying all night. I understand what he is saying but how to put it in decent English!

Thank you for any help.
Theodora OB
Local time: 04:52
English translation:white teeth with a yellow tinge
Explanation:
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Yellowish tinge
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Alex Marshall
United States
Grading comment
Thanks to all. I think I'll say slightly yellow-tinged teeth but this suggestion was the most helpful.
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Summary of answers provided
4 +5white teeth with a yellow tinge
Alex Marshall
4 +1off-white teeth
vita z
4 +1yellowed teeth
Judith Hehir
3...white yellow-tinted teeth.....
Mikhail Abramkin
4 -1pearly white smilepeninsular


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4 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +5
white teeth with a yellow tinge


Explanation:
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Note added at 16 mins (2012-01-06 20:20:11 GMT)
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Yellowish tinge

Alex Marshall
United States
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 24
Grading comment
Thanks to all. I think I'll say slightly yellow-tinged teeth but this suggestion was the most helpful.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Mark Berelekhis
10 mins

agree  The Misha: Yellowish, of course
2 hrs

agree  Olga Bogatova
3 hrs

agree  Anton Konashenok: 'yellowish' is better
4 hrs

agree  cyhul
7 days
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29 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
...white yellow-tinted teeth.....


Explanation:
...white yellow-tinted teeth.....
..мне кажется, здесь и синтаксис немаловажен..

Mikhail Abramkin
Russian Federation
Local time: 07:52
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
yellowed teeth


Explanation:
The use of tobacco products, coffee, and irregular oral hygiene routines will stain and produce yellowed teeth that diminish the original tooth whiteness.
http://www.smilessantamonica.com/teeth-whitening.html

I would avoid the tint/tinge.

Additional examples: http://tinyurl.com/6tl9hu8

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Or, if you think that's a bit overstated, you could go with "slightly yellowed teeth"

Judith Hehir
United States
Local time: 23:52
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  The Misha: My own first impulse was somewhat/slightly yellowish teeth, and that's probably how most natives would think of it. The problem is we are not writing this text, so I guess, we gotta give them white teeth with a yellowish tinge or something like it.
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11 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): -1
pearly white smile


Explanation:
In the described setting, the use of "yellow" would rob the narrative of its (it is supposed it is) romantic tone.

A possible variant is " she gave him a pearly white smile" or " she smiled revealing her pearly whites.

Pearly whites are supposed to be yellow in any case.

"In most cases, your pearly whites probably have a yellow tint for many years for your pure coloration. Its not all pearly whites start off as vibrant, and several individuals pure teeth coloration is often more yellow than white colored" http://enjoyroufuskickboxingfree.com/?p=323

peninsular
Local time: 09:22
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  The Misha: Yep, it's a great way to put it - except it is not at all what the text says. Plus, you are assuming the romantic part - heck, that may be the exact opposite here as well.
4 hrs

disagree  Natalie: По-русски это скорее соответствовало бы снежно-белому цвету, но уж никак не желтоватому
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11 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
off-white teeth


Explanation:
off-white = a grayish or yellowish white.

Example

The reason that lemon juice 'works' is that it causes the teeth to lose calcium (which gives teeth some of their off-white color).

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Note added at 11 hrs (2012-01-07 07:45:15 GMT)
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I think this is more suitable for the particular context.

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Note added at 11 hrs (2012-01-07 07:55:43 GMT)
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Or "opalescent smile" perhaps. Also implies yellowish.

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Note added at 14 hrs (2012-01-07 10:30:34 GMT)
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A possible translation could perhaps be:
She flashed me an off-white smile.


    Reference: http://www.dictionarygeek.com/?url=http://www.wordnik.com/wo...
vita z
Latvia
Local time: 06:52
Native speaker of: Native in LatvianLatvian
PRO pts in category: 4

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Michael Korovkin: excellent! Pure Woody Allen!!! :) This suggestion is literature; all the rest is dentistry and heavy to boot.
1 hr
  -> Thank you, Michael!
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