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Spanish: nos ocupa y deleita por su desbordada sabiduría

English translation: that holds our attention while it delights us with its profuse written and visual knowledge







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Spanish term or phrase:nos ocupa y deleita por su desbordada sabiduría
English translation:that holds our attention while it delights us with its profuse written and visual knowledge
Entered by:Michael Powers (PhD)
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Spanish term or phrase: nos ocupa y deleita por su desbordada sabiduría
... a través de la edición del libro que nos ocupa y deleita por su desbordada sabiduría tanto escrita como visual.

I can't decide if I can afford to ignore the "que nos ocupa" part. This is what I have, but I'm not happy with it:

this book that you have in your hands, which delights as it bursts with both written and visual knowledge
Patricia Rosas
United States
Clarification request(s) and response
Daniel Greuel: 11:21pm Oct 11, 2007: could you provide the whole sentence? i'm interested to see what the beginning says.
Patricia Rosas: 11:24pm Oct 11, 2007: Hi, Daniel: I had actually posted the rest in an earlier question, but here it is:
Un profundo agradecimiento va, sin cortapisas, para Editorial [nombre], por preservar este acervo abundante, esta memoria remota, a través de ...
Daniel Greuel: 11:25pm Oct 11, 2007: never mind, i found it in your other post :)

that holds our attention while we enjoy it overwhelming wisdom
Explanation:
I had to translate "y" as "while" to make it flow - obviously I included "nos ocupa"

Mike : )

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its overwhelming wisdom - with an "s" - itS

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Yes, your suggestion sounds very nice, Patricia.

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You're welcome, Patricia - Mike :)
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Michael Powers (PhD)
United States
Note from asker to answerer
Thanks for your help, Mike (and thanks everyone else, too!). I went with: "... that holds our attention while it delights us with its profuse written and visual knowledge" -- a tad flowery, but it'll have to do ;-)
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
4 +6it captures/engages and delights us with its richness of wisdom
Lydia De Jorge
5through this edition brimming wisdom in words and visuals that delight
Sandra Rodriguez
4that holds our attention while we enjoy it overwhelming wisdom
Michael Powers (PhD)
4which captivates us and delights us with its abounding wisdom
Daniel Greuel


  


Answers

59 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +6
it captures/engages and delights us with its richness of wisdom

Explanation:
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Lydia De Jorge
United States
Native speaker of: Native in SpanishSpanish, Native in EnglishEnglish

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree beatricepeaslee: "engages" is good.
33 mins
  -> Thanks beatrice!

agree Robert Copeland
1 hr
  -> Thanks Robert!

agree Anne Smith Campbell: Marvellous translation! :)
1 hr
  -> Thanks Anne, that's very sweet!

agree Marcelo González: I agree with beatrice; "engages" is nice / ¡saludos, Lydia!
1 hr
  -> YThanks very much Marcelo!

agree Henry Hinds
1 hr
  -> Gracias Henry!

agree Nora Bellettieri
4 hrs
  -> Gracias Nora!
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
which captivates us and delights us with its abounding wisdom

Explanation:
...in both written and visual form


another option. :)



Daniel Greuel
United States
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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4 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
through this edition brimming wisdom in words and visuals that delight

Explanation:
la frase queda más concisa, más clara

Sandra Rodriguez
Puerto Rico
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in SpanishSpanish
PRO pts in category: 12
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27 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
that holds our attention while we enjoy it overwhelming wisdom

Explanation:
I had to translate "y" as "while" to make it flow - obviously I included "nos ocupa"

Mike : )

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Note added at 27 mins (2007-10-11 20:58:44 GMT)
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its overwhelming wisdom - with an "s" - itS

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Note added at 38 mins (2007-10-11 21:08:59 GMT)
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Yes, your suggestion sounds very nice, Patricia.

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Note added at 4 days (2007-10-16 03:58:55 GMT) Post-grading
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You're welcome, Patricia - Mike :)

Michael Powers (PhD)
United States
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4
Note from asker to answerer
Thanks for your help, Mike (and thanks everyone else, too!). I went with: "... that holds our attention while it delights us with its profuse written and visual knowledge" -- a tad flowery, but it'll have to do ;-)
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thanks, Mike!

Asker: How about this: this book that holds our attention while it delights us with its profuse written and visual knowledge? wisdom in a book that is supposed to be factual somehow doesn't cut it for me ;-)


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral Lydia De Jorge: Hola Mike, somehow 'overwhelming' seems out of place as it gives a rather negative tone. Not sure, maybe it's just me. Saludos!
35 mins
  -> I agree - I think Patricia's suggestioni improves it immensely by getting rid of "overwhelming'- Mike :)
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