Spanish to English translations [PRO]
Bus/Financial - Finance (general) | | Spanish term or phrase: revisión de proyecciones para la optimización de recursos | Participé en la [...]en la red de sucursales, incluyendo desde servicios hasta Roe efectivo.
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| | review of the branch network’s resource optimization projections | Explanation:
Here's how I would translate the entire sentence:
I participated in the review of the branch network’s resource optimization projections, from services to effective ROE.
Most of the other answers given are on target. This one may sound a little more fluid in English.
After so many "of the" and "for the" phrases, the sentence can get really long in English, and can begin sounding unnatural and redundant.
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Brandon Fancher
United States
Local time: 01:12
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2 hrs confidence:  peer agreement (net): +2 review of the branch network’s resource optimization projections
Explanation:
Here's how I would translate the entire sentence:
I participated in the review of the branch network’s resource optimization projections, from services to effective ROE.
Most of the other answers given are on target. This one may sound a little more fluid in English.
After so many "of the" and "for the" phrases, the sentence can get really long in English, and can begin sounding unnatural and redundant.
I hope this helps
| Brandon Fancher
United States
Local time: 01:12
Native speaker of:  English
PRO pts in category: 4
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| | Grading comment | Selected automatically based on peer agreement. |
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