@ Richard 04:25 Nov 7
"In order to be able to sell" sounds really odd in English. You can just say "in order to sell", etc. Also if you are using the word "any" you may want to pluralize the word "share" ...any shares to a third party... shall offer said shares...and I would use Elizabeth's suggestion ending the sentence with "first", that way it sounds very natural in English. Just an idea otherwise the sentence sounds "translated" |