02:53 Nov 11, 2011 |
Spanish to English translations [PRO] Art/Literary - Other | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Henry Hinds United States Local time: 20:43 | ||||||
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flame of love |
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A man who awakens ( ) love ( ) is a real coward Explanation: The biggest or the greatest cowardice of a man is to awake a woman's love without the intention of loving her. A man who awakens a woman's love without any intention of loving her is a real coward My version. |
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There is no greater cowardly act/cowardice than a man who arouses the love Explanation: Another option There is no greater cowardly act than a man's arousal of the love of a women he has no intention of loving -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 31 mins (2011-11-11 03:24:57 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- I prefer the second option which I changed, while forgetting to change the bold option |
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the worst form of cowardice in a man is to kindle the flame of love in a woman and then let her down Explanation: I would suggest -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 32 mins (2011-11-11 03:25:17 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- or: and then snuff it (to keep the metaphor) -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 33 mins (2011-11-11 03:26:04 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- poor woman if that's what happens to her -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 38 mins (2011-11-11 03:31:21 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- and should read: snuff it out (otherwise you might think the man croaks/dies lol) -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr (2011-11-11 03:54:29 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- nice to get a poetic one (so rare) |
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