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English translation: The streets lay in the grip of some hellish Garbage Monster from the future.


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Spanish term or phrase:promontorios de basura (see sentence)
English translation:The streets lay in the grip of some hellish Garbage Monster from the future.
Entered by: Carol Ribeiro - Mark-in Marketing Integrado
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23:06 Apr 28, 2009
Spanish to English translations [PRO]
Tourism & Travel
Spanish term or phrase: promontorios de basura
This is an article for a magazine and is talking about San Salvador, Oscar Romero, etc.

La ciudad comenzaba a desperezarse después de la resaca de la fiesta. En las calles, los promontorios de basura lucían como una pesadilla futurista.


I'd appreciate any help regarding the whole sentence. I can't think of a way to write it without making it sound literal.
TIA
Carol Ribeiro - Mark-in Marketing Integrado
Local time: 16:12
The streets lay in the grip of some hellish Garbage Monster from the future.
Explanation:
I think this conveys the meaning and tone.

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Note added at 9 hrs (2009-04-29 08:47:26 GMT)
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another option, closer to the source text:

The streets lay under swathes of garbage, like some bad dream about the future.
Selected response from:

Deborah Lockett
Local time: 20:12
Grading comment
Thanks very much Deborah! Despite all the other answers, I think this is in the spirit of what it's trying to say.
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
4 +10mountains of rubbish/garbage/trashpatinba
4 +7mounds of garbage
Steven Huddleston
5 +3trash heaps
Robert Manipole
5 +2piles / bunches of trash
Enrique Huber
4 +1piles of rubbish/rubbish pilescgowar
4peninsulas of castoffs
Richard Boulter
4promontories / cliffs of garbage/trash/rubbish
darwinista
3The streets lay in the grip of some hellish Garbage Monster from the future.
Deborah Lockett
3 -2pinnacles of trash
Sara Brown


Discussion entries: 3





  

Answers


6 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +10
mountains of rubbish/garbage/trash


Explanation:
gave the streets the look of some futuristic nightmare.

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patinba
Argentina
Local time: 16:12
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 88

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Simon Charass: I like "garbage/trash" better.
29 mins
  -> Thanks, Simon! For the US and Canada, certainly.

agree  silviantonia
1 hr
  -> thanks!

agree  Joseph Tein: Hola. I like this one, too.
5 hrs
  -> Thank-you!

agree  margaret caulfield
6 hrs
  -> Thanks, Margaret!

agree  Carol Gullidge: it's rubbish for me (UK)!
9 hrs
  -> Yes ideed! Thanks, Carol!

agree  David Ronder: I think you need to preserve the geographical connotation, and hills doesn´t work. Could you get away with "like something out of Wall-E" for the futuristic bit?
11 hrs
  -> That's certainly what is meant. Thanks!

agree  cmwilliams
11 hrs
  -> Thank-you!

agree  neilmac: Like the managerial twaddle I often have to translate ;)
11 hrs
  -> 'Fraid so. Thanks, Neil!

agree  Lisa McCarthy: Like it! (Rubbish for me - UK)
12 hrs
  -> Thanks, Lisa!

agree  bcsantos: Rubbish for me too - UK
18 hrs
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8 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +2
piles / bunches of trash


Explanation:
The piles of trash could be seen on the streets, showing their heads like a furturistic nightmare.
One idea...

Enrique Huber
Mexico
Local time: 14:12
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in SpanishSpanish
PRO pts in category: 4

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Ma.Elena Carrión de Medina: I like **piles** too.
12 mins
  -> Muchas gracias desde Cancún, México

agree  Joseph Tein: Hola Cancún. I like your suggestion, and the sentence.
5 hrs
  -> Thank you very much
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55 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +7
mounds of garbage


Explanation:
Just so, simply.

Steven Huddleston
United States
Local time: 15:12
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in SpanishSpanish

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Eileen Banks
53 mins
  -> Thank you, Eileen!

agree  silviantonia: I like this one too...
1 hr
  -> Thank you, Silviantonia!

agree  Joseph Tein: Hi Steven. Mounds of garbage ... a nice, useful phrase :)
4 hrs
  -> Thank you, Joseph!

agree  margaret caulfield: Also.
6 hrs
  -> Thank you, Margaret!

agree  Carol Gullidge: this also works well
8 hrs
  -> Thank you, Carol!

agree  Lisa McCarthy: Like this too!
11 hrs
  -> Thank you, LisaMac!

agree  bcsantos: As well.
17 hrs
  -> Thank you, Bcsantos!
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +3
trash heaps


Explanation:
In the streets, the trash heaps appeared as if they were straight out of some futuristic nightmare.


    Reference: http://www.thefreedictionary.com/trash+heap
Robert Manipole
United States
Local time: 15:12
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Mónica Algazi
29 mins
  -> Gracias Monica!

agree  Juan Carlos García
49 mins
  -> Gracias Juan!

agree  Joseph Tein: 'Trash heaps' also has an appealing ring to it.
3 hrs
  -> Gracias Joseph!
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): -2
pinnacles of trash


Explanation:
#
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#
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Twin Eagles Pinnacle 18 Inch Tall Trash Drawer available at Weber BBQ Grills. The Twin Eagles stainless steel Trash Drawer is a great addition to the ...
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Twin Eagles Pinnacle 18 Inch Trash/Tank Drawer : Outdoor Kitchens ...
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Twin Eagles Pinnacle 18 Inch Trash/Tank Drawer available at Outdoor Kitchens Depot. The Twin Eagles stainless steel Trash Drawer is a great addition to the ...
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Note added at 2 hrs (2009-04-29 01:19:51 GMT)
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La ciudad comenzaba a desperezarse después de la resaca de la fiesta. En las calles, los promontorios de basura lucían como una pesadilla futurista.

The city was slowly waking from its post-holiday hangover. In the streets, the pinnacles of trash were a futuristic nightmare.

Sara Brown
Argentina
Local time: 16:12
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in SpanishSpanish

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
disagree  Joseph Tein: NO - I'm sorry - this doesn't make sense! This might make a nice poetic phrase or title but is an inappropriate confusion of the meaning of 'promontorio'. Also, the examples above don't support this at all.
3 hrs

disagree  margaret caulfield: I agree entirely with Joseph!
4 hrs

neutral  Carol Gullidge: the examples are totally irrelevant to the question
7 hrs
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7 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
piles of rubbish/rubbish piles


Explanation:
In the streets, rubbish piles looked like a futuristic nightmare.

If you look at the coverage of any rubbish crisis, this is the most used expression:
http://www.guardian.co.uk/world/2008/jan/07/italy.environmen...
The Italian army was today called in to start clearing festering piles of rubbish from the streets of Naples
http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/world/europe/6684635.stm
Residents of the Italian city of Naples have been torching piles of rotting rubbish in the steets amid a worsening refuse crisis.
http://www.independent.co.uk/news/world/europe/stinking-napl...
http://www.telegraph.co.uk/earth/earthnews/3320852/Naples-ru...
Burning rubbish piles in the streets of Naples are threatening an environmental disaster, experts warn.


cgowar
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in SpanishSpanish
PRO pts in category: 28

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Carol Gullidge: another good possibility
1 hr
  -> Thank you Carol!
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9 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
The streets lay in the grip of some hellish Garbage Monster from the future.


Explanation:
I think this conveys the meaning and tone.

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Note added at 9 hrs (2009-04-29 08:47:26 GMT)
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another option, closer to the source text:

The streets lay under swathes of garbage, like some bad dream about the future.

Deborah Lockett
Local time: 20:12
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 155
Grading comment
Thanks very much Deborah! Despite all the other answers, I think this is in the spirit of what it's trying to say.
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7 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
promontories / cliffs of garbage/trash/rubbish


Explanation:
I don't think the English equivalent sounds bad. Also suggesting a synonym for promontory. Agree with everybody else that depending on the country the translation is for you'll have to pick the best option for "garbage".

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Note added at 11 hrs (2009-04-29 10:39:26 GMT)
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"Promontories /cliffs of trash/rubbish/garbage swelled / jutted out like an apocalyptic nightmare"

darwinista
Local time: 21:12
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in SpanishSpanish
PRO pts in category: 16
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13 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
peninsulas of castoffs


Explanation:
I like this for a fun, tough urban setting. Especially if there's an opportunity to translate 'fiords of life leading to the local abodes' somewhere in the source. :))

Richard Boulter
United States
Local time: 13:12
Works in field
Native speaker of: English
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