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mayor penetración de la mirada

English translation: greater clarity and acuteness of vision


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Spanish term or phrase:mayor penetración de la mirada
English translation:greater clarity and acuteness of vision
Entered by: Marimar Novoa
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10:33 Oct 2, 2011
Spanish to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Tourism & Travel
Spanish term or phrase: mayor penetración de la mirada
El contexto es un folleto turístico con un lenguaje bastante literario.
"... En dichos días, en virtud de una ****mayor penetración de la mirada**** por la sequedad ambiental, nos parece poder tocar desde el mar..."

Llevo dándole vueltas desde ayer pero no se me enciende la bombilla.

¡Muchas gracias!
Marimar Novoa
Local time: 17:24
greater clarity and acuteness of vision
Explanation:
Suggested (literary) translation: On those days such is the greater clarity and penetrating acuteness of vision caused by the arid atmosphere that we feel as though...it seems to us that...

Hope this helps!
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Mark Radcliffe
United Kingdom
Grading comment
I like your suggestion, I'll use it for the practice test.
Many thanks to everyone, it's very interesting to learn from more experienced translators!
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
4greater clarity and acuteness of vision
Mark Radcliffe
4greater unobstructed view
Stefano Nicola D'Amato
3 +1greater penetration of vision
Dr Neil Ashby


  

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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
greater penetration of vision


Explanation:
.IN those days thanks to a greater penetration of vision, due to a drier environment,.....

Dr Neil Ashby
Spain
Local time: 18:24
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4

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agree  manuel seixo
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5 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
greater unobstructed view


Explanation:
Como dices, utilizan un lenguaje bastante literario.
No se me ocurre nada más literario en inglés por el momento.

Stefano Nicola D'Amato
United States
Local time: 12:24
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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8 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
greater clarity and acuteness of vision


Explanation:
Suggested (literary) translation: On those days such is the greater clarity and penetrating acuteness of vision caused by the arid atmosphere that we feel as though...it seems to us that...

Hope this helps!

Mark Radcliffe
United Kingdom
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4
Grading comment
I like your suggestion, I'll use it for the practice test.
Many thanks to everyone, it's very interesting to learn from more experienced translators!
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