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Thread poster: clearwater

clearwater
China
Local time: 21:54
English to Chinese
Sep 8, 2009

下面这段内容选自介绍下一代资产管理技术的文章。
Chargeback, demand management, and customer usage analysis – While traditionally linked in thought and definition to bill generation for lines of business, some of these products can also support an understanding of service value from a demand perspective (and infrastructure optimization from a usage perspective). This is one of NGAM’s capstones; ****mostly available today outside of domain-specific accounting (e.g., database usage) through platforms and niche providers. ****
试译:
费用分摊、需求管理和客户使用分析――尽管过去认为这些产品中有一些的理念和定义与业务部门的账单费用生成有关,但它们也有助于从业务的角度理解服务价值(并且有助于从客户使用的角度理解基础架构优化)。这一块是下一代资产管理的核心之一,****如今主要通过平台供应商和利基市场供应商来获得,不属于特定领域会计(比如数据库使用)的范畴。****

感觉最后一句着实不好处理。谢谢指点!


 

clearwater
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Local time: 21:54
English to Chinese
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wherestip  Identity Verified
United States
Local time: 08:54
Chinese to English
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也顶一下 Sep 13, 2009

clearwater,

我觉得这段翻得很好, 意思上基本都对. 最后一句也处理得很好.

"会计" 一词有些单薄, 是否考虑说 "会计学"、 "会计专业" 或 "会计分类". 这样中文读起来比较清楚是在说什么. 当然不加也好, 搞不好挑错的人还说是翻错了.icon_wink.gif

会计 - accountant, accounting
会计学, 会计业务 - accounting



[Edited at 2009-09-14 12:21 GMT]


 


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