Off topic: Poem written by a terminally ill girl - shared with you to remind you to slow down.
Thread poster: swisstell

swisstell
Italy
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Sep 18, 2006

Have you ever watched kids on a merry-go round? / Or listened to the rain slapping on the ground? / Ever followed a butterfly's erratic flight? / Or gazed at the sun into the fading night? / You better slow down. Don't dance so fast. / Time is short. The music won't last. / Do you run through each day on the fly? / When you ask 'how are you' do you hear the reply? / When the day is done, do you lie in your bed / with the next hundred chores running through your head? / You'd better slow down, don't dance so fast. / Time is short. The music won't last. / Ever told your child we'll do it tomorrow? / And in your haste not see their sorrow? / Ever lost touch, let a good friendship die / because you never had time to call and say "hi'. / You'd better slow down. Don't dance so fast. / Time is short. The music won't last. / When you run so fast got get somewhere / you miss half the fun of getting there / when you worry and hurry through your day / it's like an unopened gift ...thrown away. / Life is not a race. Do take it slower / Listen to the music, before the song is over.

 

Jack Doughty  Identity Verified
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Thank you for posting that. Sep 18, 2006

A very moving poem under the circumstances.

 

giogi
Local time: 00:59
Please, children are our future...check your sources! Sep 18, 2006

The "Slow Dance" poem was written not by a "terminally ill young girl in a New York Hospital" who wanted "as her dying wish to send a letter telling everyone to live their life to the fullest," but by David L. Weatherford, an adult male child psychologist.

http://www.snopes.com/inboxer/medical/slowdance.asp

If the link doesn't work please just type either the first line of the poemor the author's name on the google!

http://www.appleseeds.org/slow-dance.htm



[Edited at 2006-09-18 19:21]


 

mediamatrix (X)
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That may be true .... Sep 18, 2006

Giovanna Rampone, PhD wrote:

The "Slow Dance" poem was written not by a "terminally ill young girl in a New York Hospital" who wanted "as her dying wish to send a letter telling everyone to live their life to the fullest," but by David L. Weatherford, an adult male child psychologist.



.... but the scam behind the poem in no way detracts from the message per se, which we would all do well to ponder...


 

swisstell
Italy
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thanks - Sep 18, 2006

sad if one cannot trust the sources any longer.

 

Trevor Butcher
Local time: 01:59
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If only I had time to read it... Sep 19, 2006

Is it sad that we cannot trust the sources anymore because the sources have become unreliable, or is it sad they we are now aware the sources were never that reliable anyway?

Trevor


 

claudia bagnardi  Identity Verified
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Source vs contents Sep 19, 2006

It is really a nice poem. Worth a second thought.
Thanks SwissTell!
Claudia


 


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