what I lack in happiness

French translation: ce qui manque à mon bonheur

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English term or phrase:what I lack in happiness
French translation:ce qui manque à mon bonheur
Entered by: Willa95

11:09 Jun 7, 2016
English to French translations [PRO]
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English term or phrase: what I lack in happiness
Bonjour à tous,

On reproche (implicitement) à une femme de 35 ans de ne pas être encore mariée. Celle-ci se justifie.

"Mid-30s, female, single. I’ll tell you what I’m really missing. What I’m really missing is a society that stops telling me what I lack in happiness."

"Etre une femme de 35 ans et qui plus est, célibataire me fait soi-disant passer à côté de ma vie. Et pourtant, la seule chose qui m’intéresse, c’est de vivre dans une société qui arrête de me dire que je ne connais pas le vrai bonheur."

Est-ce "que je ne connais pas le vrai bonheur" convient ici pour "what I lack in happiness". Peut-être pensez-vous à quelque chose de moins long dans ce contexte ?

Merci
Willa95
France
Local time: 04:41
ce qui manque à mon bonheur
Explanation:
Ça me semble la traduction la plus directe et fidèle.
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Yoann Peyron
France
Local time: 04:41
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Summary of answers provided
4 +3ce qu'il me manque pour être heureuse
GILLES MEUNIER
4 +3ce qui manque à mon bonheur
Yoann Peyron
3 +3ce dont j'ai besoin pour être heureuse
Isabelle Cluzel
4quel est le bonheur que je laisse passer / ... que je pourrais avoir / ... qui me fait défaut
Daryo
4le bonheur qui me manque
Francois Boye
3mon déficit/mes lacunes en matière de bonheur
Anne-Marie Laliberté (X)


Discussion entries: 15





  

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3 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +3
what i lack in happiness
ce dont j'ai besoin pour être heureuse


Explanation:
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Isabelle Cluzel
France
Local time: 04:41
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 116

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Claude B
5 mins

agree  Anne Gaujard-Scott: J'aime bien aussi comment vous avez traduit le reste !
1 hr

agree  Marion Hallouet
1 hr
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6 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +3
what i lack in happiness
ce qu'il me manque pour être heureuse


Explanation:
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GILLES MEUNIER
France
Local time: 04:41
Native speaker of: French
PRO pts in category: 990

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  TB CommuniCAT
9 mins

agree  Alain Marsol: Oui, c'est plus fidèle au texte source.
5 hrs

agree  Jean-Claude Gouin
10 hrs
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36 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
quel est le bonheur que je laisse passer / ... que je pourrais avoir / ... qui me fait défaut


Explanation:
telling me what I lack in happiness = telling me about the happiness I am missing (because I'm not married)

the exact meaning - OTOH this not being a contract where even a wrong comma could cost millions, there are many possible ways of rewording it...

Daryo
United Kingdom
Local time: 03:41
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in SerbianSerbian, Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 112
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
what i lack in happiness
le bonheur qui me manque


Explanation:
my take

Francois Boye
United States
Local time: 22:41
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 84
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
what i lack in happiness
mon déficit/mes lacunes en matière de bonheur


Explanation:
...

Anne-Marie Laliberté (X)
Local time: 22:41
Native speaker of: French
PRO pts in category: 28
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +3
what i lack in happiness
ce qui manque à mon bonheur


Explanation:
Ça me semble la traduction la plus directe et fidèle.

Yoann Peyron
France
Local time: 04:41
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: French
PRO pts in category: 28

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Françoise Vogel: ce que proposait d'ailleurs notre "asker" (cf. discussion)
2 hrs

agree  Sandra Mouton
16 hrs

agree  Annie Rigler
23 hrs
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