20:45 Mar 24, 2005 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / children's literature | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Michael Schubert United States Local time: 18:46 | ||||||
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like a soft cotton (etc., below) Explanation: I would drop one comma, add another, use "a" soft cotton ... ================================== Cat’s Eye’s eyes burnt with a yellow fire as he wrapped his slyness around her like a soft cotton blanket, leaving no strength in her to resist. She knew she should not trust him, but there was nothing she could do. |
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