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English translation: It's a bad sentence

16:59 Sep 2, 2012
Chinese to English translations [PRO]
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Chinese term or phrase: **I need help to translate this sentence!**
九寨的秋天以明朗的高原风光为基调,融翠湖、迭瀑、秋林为主。

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celiacheung85
celiacheung85
China
English translation:It's a bad sentence
Explanation:
A quick search throws up some much more sensible versions:

In autumn, Jiuzhaigou is flooded with clear mountain light, sparkling on its emerald-green lakes, its cascade falls and the autumn forest leaves.

九寨沟以明朗的高原风光为基调,融翠湖、叠瀑、秋林、雪峰于一体。
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Phil Hand
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It's a bad sentence


Explanation:
A quick search throws up some much more sensible versions:

In autumn, Jiuzhaigou is flooded with clear mountain light, sparkling on its emerald-green lakes, its cascade falls and the autumn forest leaves.

九寨沟以明朗的高原风光为基调,融翠湖、叠瀑、秋林、雪峰于一体。

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