correct?

English translation: nearly correct

08:25 Feb 17, 2005

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Dutch term or phrase: correct?

Graag bieden wij onze klanten de gelegenheid om in nauwe samenwerking met XXX productgerichte trainingen op maat te verzorgen in ons trainingscentrum of op lokatie ten einde de kwaliteit van onze dienstverlening en van onze medewerkers te optimaliseren.

Heb ik als volgt vertaald, en weet niet zeker of het laatste deel goed is vertaald;

We would like to offer our clients the opportunity to provide, in close consultation with xxxx, customized product-oriented trainings either at our training center or on site to be able to optimize the quality of our service and personnel.

Christel

English translation:nearly correct

Explanation:
training isn't used in the plural form
ten einde = in order to, so that

Without tinkering too much with your version:
We would like to offer our clients the opportunity to provide, in close consultation with xxxx, customized product-oriented training courses either at our training center or on site in order to optimize (or: with a view to optimizing) the quality of our services and personnel.

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MoiraB
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