We want to enhance returns for XXX shareholders

Spanish translation: Queremos mejorar la rentabilidad de los accionistas de XXX [tu traducción]

15:18 May 8, 2018
English to Spanish translations [PRO]
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English term or phrase: We want to enhance returns for XXX shareholders
I do not know how to translate this sentence into Spanish:
•We want to enhance returns for XXX shareholders and do this by delivering on the Finance Strategy, being a world class finance team and balancing risk and opportunity
I have translated this paragraph as:
•Queremos mejorar la rentabilidad de accionistas XXX y, hacemos esto, al conseguir la estrategia financiera; al ser un equipo de finanzas de clase mundial, y al equilibrar los riesgos y oportunidades.
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Spanish translation:Queremos mejorar la rentabilidad de los accionistas de XXX [tu traducción]
Explanation:
Creo que tu traducción funciona.

Le añadimos "LOS" y "DE", pero creo que fluye y es comprensible.

Queremos mejorar la rentabilidad de LOS accionistas DE XXX

Saludos cordiales.
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we want to enhance returns for xxx shareholders
Queremos mejorar la rentabilidad de los accionistas de XXX [tu traducción]


Explanation:
Creo que tu traducción funciona.

Le añadimos "LOS" y "DE", pero creo que fluye y es comprensible.

Queremos mejorar la rentabilidad de LOS accionistas DE XXX

Saludos cordiales.

JohnMcDove
United States
Local time: 07:38
Native speaker of: Native in SpanishSpanish
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