of when they occurred

Spanish translation: de su ocurrencia.

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English term or phrase: of when they occurred
Spanish translation:de su ocurrencia.

11:37 Jan 31, 2018
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English to Spanish translations [PRO]
Medical: Pharmaceuticals / protocol
English term or phrase: of when they occurred
I want to know if this phrase is correct within the following context:

Serious Adverse Events: within 24 business hours of when they occurred.

Eventos Adversos Serios: dentro de las 24 horas hábiles de ocurridos.

My question is whether it is more correct to state the last part of the sentence as "of their occurrence".

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Maria Iglesia Ramos
Spain
de su ocurrencia.
Explanation:
Dentro de 24 horas hábiles de su ocurrencia.
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Ryan Kelly
United States
Local time: 10:05
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Summary of answers provided
5 +1de su ocurrencia.
Ryan Kelly
3 +124 hours
Susan Andrew
4antes de 24 horas hábiles
Ester Vidal


Discussion entries: 4





  

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de su ocurrencia.


Explanation:
Dentro de 24 horas hábiles de su ocurrencia.

Ryan Kelly
United States
Local time: 10:05
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in SpanishSpanish
PRO pts in category: 4
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Daniel Liberman
5 hrs
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44 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
24 hours


Explanation:
Wouldn't 24 "business" hours mean 3 days? (8 "business" hours in a day)

I think the whole thing sounds more natural in English to just leave it as "within 24 hours" - it's quite clear that it means 24 hours from when the effects first started.
Or if you wanted you could put "within 24 hours of the onset"

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Note added at 46 mins (2018-01-31 12:23:20 GMT)
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Now I'm not sure... Did you want the sentence in Spanish or English?

Susan Andrew
Local time: 15:05
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Robert Forstag: “Within 24 hours” all by itself would not work (because that could reasonably taken to mean “within 24 hours of having been informed of the occurrence” ). In any event, the text does say “business hours” (strange, but there you have it).
31 mins
  -> You might be right Robert, I'm not sure...

agree  philgoddard: Yes, "hábiles de ocurridos" is redundant in English, and possibly Spanish as well. The question is confusing because it has an English phrase where there should be a Spanish one.
58 mins
  -> Thanks Phil
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4 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
antes de 24 horas hábiles


Explanation:
Avisar antes de 24 horas hábiles desde que suceden.


Te pongo un link sobre condiciones de aviso para Serious Adverse Events en clinical trials, no sé si te servirá.



    https://firstclinical.com/fda-gcp/?show=2015/Question%20Regarding%20the%20Prompt%20Reporting%20of%20Serious%20Adverse%20Events_Redacted&form
Ester Vidal
Spain
Local time: 16:05
Native speaker of: Native in CatalanCatalan, Native in SpanishSpanish
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