Apr 7, 2005 16:03
19 yrs ago
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otherwise
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This market value is to be estimated by commercial bank or land estimation company chosen by the Tenant. Otherwise, the Tenant may force the Landlord to pay two-fold of the rent already paid by the Tenant, depending on which amount is higher.
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I think the word Otherwise is inappropriate. What I intend to convey is: The Tenant can choose either of 2 choice.
1) let the company give the estimate
or 2) force the landlord to pay 2-fold of the rent.
Is the word Otherwise appropriate ? If not , please change it.
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I think the word Otherwise is inappropriate. What I intend to convey is: The Tenant can choose either of 2 choice.
1) let the company give the estimate
or 2) force the landlord to pay 2-fold of the rent.
Is the word Otherwise appropriate ? If not , please change it.
Responses
| 4 +6 | alternatively |
Cilian O'Tuama
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| 5 | De no ser así... |
claudia bagnardi
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| 3 +2 | --->>> |
TranslatonatoR
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| 4 | alternatively, instead |
Luiza Modesto
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| 4 | otherwise |
Britta Anion (X)
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Responses
+6
4 mins
Cilian O'Tuama
Germany
Germany
Native in English
&
English
Germany
Quality Translations since 1986
Native in: English
Works in: German to English, English, German, and 6 more.
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alternatively
I see you still haven't logged in. We don't bite ;-)
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Graded automatically based on peer agreement."
4 mins
Luiza Modesto
Brazil
Brazil
Native in English
&
English
Brazil
specializes in research articles
Native in: English 
, Portuguese
Works in: Portuguese to English, English to Portuguese, English
alternatively, instead
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3 mins
claudia bagnardi
30 years translating law and finance
Native in: Spanish 
Works in: English to Spanish, Spanish, Spanish to English, and 1 more.
De no ser así...
ésto sirve para tus dos alternativas, me parece.
Claudia
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Note added at 5 mins (2005-04-07 16:09:08 GMT)
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SORRY!!!! IT WAS EN-EN!!!!
+2
9 mins
TranslatonatoR
"Bi-Cultural & Bi-Lingual"
Native in: Russian
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English
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This market value is to be estimated by a commercial bank or land estimation company chosen by the Tenant. Depending on which amount is higher, the Tenant may "use"/"proceed with" the "given"/"obtained" estimate, or force the Landlord to pay two-fold of the rent already paid by the Tenant.
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Can Altinbay
: I prefer this recast to the other choices.
19 mins
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thank you
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| agree |
Robert Donahue (X)
5 hrs
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thank you
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12 mins
otherwise
I think "otherwise" makes sense here.
If you are not comfortable with it, how about just saying: the tenant has the right to have the value estimated by..., or can otherwise make the landlord pay...
If you are not comfortable with it, how about just saying: the tenant has the right to have the value estimated by..., or can otherwise make the landlord pay...
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