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English translation: Here's how I would write it.

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10:56 Aug 1, 2001
English to English translations [Non-PRO]
Art/Literary
English term or phrase: poem
My grammar is so bad. Anyone plz check the grammar of the poem below for me. Thank you very much

Mother is greater than anyone.
Mother is incomparable to nothing.
Mother care us less than no one.
We \'re the heart of our mother.
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English translation:Here's how I would write it.
Explanation:
Mother is greater than anyone.
Mother is incomparable.
Mother cares about us more than anyone.
We're the heart of our mother.
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abernard
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na +2Here's how I would write it.
abernard
naNoone compares to my Mum! Mother cares about us from the start, Forever we're in our Mother's heart
xxxWCampbell


  

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32 mins peer agreement (net): +2
Here's how I would write it.


Explanation:
Mother is greater than anyone.
Mother is incomparable.
Mother cares about us more than anyone.
We're the heart of our mother.



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abernard
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agree  jgal: Yes, but: we are (in) our mother's heart!
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agree  Robert Donahue
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Noone compares to my Mum! Mother cares about us from the start, Forever we're in our Mother's heart


Explanation:
First line stays the same. These make the poem rhyme all the way through and convey the same meaning.

xxxWCampbell
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