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English translation: It's quite good, I suggest a few small amendments (see below)

09:02 Oct 24, 2007

English language (monolingual) [PRO]
Education / Pedagogy

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Hello All,

Is there any mistakes in the sentence below? Many thanks

** I trust that our university, playing host to “Autumn Agora 2007” activity today, will enable participants from abroad and university students in Eskisehir to meet and will help cultural Interaction to be created among the students and will also help students to develop different perspectives.

I would like to take this opportunity to congratulate to all involved. **

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Selected answer:It's quite good, I suggest a few small amendments (see below)

Explanation:
I trust that our university, by playing host to the “Autumn Agora 2007” activities today, will enable participants from abroad and university students in Eskisehir to meet, will facilitate cultural interaction between the students, and will also help them develop different perspectives.

I would like to take this opportunity to congratulate to all those involved.

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Note added at 8 mins (2007-10-24 09:10:45 GMT)
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Yes, you're quite right, it should be "to congratulate all those involved".

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Jack Doughty
United Kingdom
Local time: 22:01

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Thank you very much.
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It's quite good, I suggest a few small amendments (see below)

Jack Doughty

Eskisehir to meet. This will facilitate

Patricia Townshend (X)

Discussion entries: 1

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It's quite good, I suggest a few small amendments (see below)

Jack Doughty
United Kingdom
Local time: 22:01
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 56

Grading comment

Thank you very much.

Notes to answerer

Asker: Thanks a million, Jack. You are an absolute star.

11 mins confidence:

Eskisehir to meet. This will facilitate

Explanation:
I agree with Jack, but I also think it would be more comprehensible if split into two sentences. Don't know if this is permissible though!

Patricia Townshend (X)
South Africa
Local time: 23:01
Works in field
Native speaker of:

English

Notes to answerer

Asker: Thanks a million, Patricia.

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