17:39 Apr 17, 2006 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Law/Patents - Law: Contract(s) / non-disclosure letter | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Robert Forstag United States Local time: 06:00 | ||||||
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SUMMARY OF ALL EXPLANATIONS PROVIDED | ||||
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4 +6 | [below] |
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5 | rephrasing |
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3 | In regard to the potential transaction, the information you requested ... |
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[below] Explanation: In connection with a possible transaction between you and YYY, owner of 0.99990% of the shares of xxx.... This wording would be more economical, while preserving the original meaning. "Your consideration of" here is pure fat, and would be implicitly understood. |
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