14:28 Apr 7, 2007 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Linguistics | |||||
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| Selected response from: Richard Benham France Local time: 11:04 | ||||
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3 +4 | My version of amended text |
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4 | indirekte Rede |
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3 | please see below |
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please see below Explanation: (1a) If she receives the letter tomorrow, she'll be in a bad mood. Last Sunday he said that if she didn't receive the letter on the following/next day, she would/she'd be in a bad mood (1b) If she'll receive the letter tomorrow anyway, I'll warn her about it right away. Last Sunday he said that if she was going to receive/ would be receiving the letter on the following/next day, he would/he'd warn her about it right then. (2a) If Smith does not shoot Peterson tomorrow, someone else will. Last Sunday he said that if Smith didn't shoot Peterson on the following/next day, someone else would. (2b) If Smith (being already locked up) will not shoot Peterson tomorrow, then Last Sunday he said that if Smith (havimg already been locked up) did not shoot Peterson on the following/next day, then someone else would -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 11 mins (2007-04-07 14:39:34 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- The last one could also be "... if Smith (having already been locked up) was not going to shoot Peterson on the following/next day, ... " |
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My version of amended text Explanation: Maybe it's presumptuous of me to criticize people who are presumably eminent authorities in this field, but I don't like the original direct speech versions. (1a) If she receives the letter tomorrow, she'll be in a bad mood. (OK) (1b) If she'll receive the letter tomorrow anyway, I'll warn her about it right away. Should be "if she receives" here too, not "if she'll receive". . (2a) If Smith does not shoot Peterson tomorrow, someone else will. (2b) If Smith (being already locked up) will not shoot Peterson tomorrow, then someone else will shoot Peterson tomorrow. I think in should be "cannot", rather than "will not" (seeing that he is already locked up), and the repetition of "tomorrow" is superfluous. So on that basis: (1a) If she received the letter the next day, she would be in a bad mood. (1b) If she received the letter the next day, he would warn her about it right away. (2a) If Smith did not shoot Peterson the next day, someone else would. (2b) If Smith (being already locked up) could not shoot Peterson the next day, then someone else would. |
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