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12:48 Oct 24, 2005
English to English translations [Non-PRO] Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / children's literature Region (target): English (United States)
English term or phrase:found them so full of determination
But Olya gripped her hand tightly.
“I’m going with you, or else we’ll quarrel forever.”
Masha gazed into her eyes and found them so full of determination that she had to give in.
Dear native English speakers!
Please advise if the phrase sounds OK. It seems somewhat awkward to me, but I can't be 100% sure, not being a NES.
The talk is between two girls who are best friends.
This is my translation from Russian.