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4 +2 | 业务创收 |
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4 +1 | 带来生意;业务增长 |
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4 | 业务交付 |
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3 | 真实/实际业务量/业务数据递送(传递)量 |
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真实/实际业务量/业务数据递送(传递)量 Explanation: 根据原文看,这些改进应该和business delivery 没有太直接的联系。从后文看,这些改进之一如为节约数据中心的用电量就可以间接提高效率,很明显这些改进不像提高实际业务量等那样立竿见影,这方的改进要得到批准很不容易。所以第一句后的所有原文都是在说怎样去说服高级经理批准这些改进的方法。 |
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带来生意;业务增长 Explanation: 8. Commerce. a shipment of goods from the seller to the buyer. herein it means the generation of business (transactions), or the returns from the investment -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr (2007-09-15 02:43:36 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- 其实,翻译至少应当以句甚至更大的单位为操作单位,因此,这句用 “带来生意;业务增长”不会有生硬之嫌!比如,Convincing senior managers to fund data center improvements not directly related to {business delivery} can be a challenge. “如果不能直接带来业务增长,那么说服高级经理给数据中心改进项目拨款可能极为困难。”啊啊。 Reference: http://www.dictionary.com |
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业务交付 Explanation: delivery 交付、交货的意思 |
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业务创收 Explanation: "business delivery" imlplies those activities that are directly related to generating revenues. |
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