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00:58 Dec 2, 2010
English to Chinese translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / Peotry
English term or phrase: One, two, three! in hasty race Time is running, we keep pace.
Author: W. Busch

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4尽量保持诗体的结构,做到押韵
SophieT
3 +1一、二、三,與時賽跑,滴踏滴,齊步向前
pkchan


  

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14 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
one, two, three! in hasty race time is running, we keep pace.
一、二、三,與時賽跑,滴踏滴,齊步向前


Explanation:
OR﹕一、二、三,齊步向前,滴踏滴,與時賽跑

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one, two, three! in hasty race time is running, we keep pace.
尽量保持诗体的结构,做到押韵


Explanation:
时光易逝难追忆,
顺时而动莫踌躇 。

因为原文是诗体,所以在译文中尽量做到押韵,至少做到上下句意思押韵。

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