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01:01 Dec 2, 2010
English to Chinese translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / Peotry
English term or phrase: Peotry translation
Happy New Year – whether good or bad will later become clear
yet if it just brings health and good cheer
and enough money, then there’s nothing to fear.
(W. Busch)

Ask for Chinese translation for the above poetry with rhyme at the end of the line.
Grace Guo
Local time: 08:57
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Summary of answers provided
4 +1见解释栏内两版翻译
Grace Liu
4七言绝句版
SophieT
4见解释栏内翻译
jennygzq


  

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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
peotry translation
见解释栏内两版翻译


Explanation:
贺新禧 – 不管运程是否会清晰
只要有钱有乐有个好身体
你尽管一路前进披荆斩棘(所向披靡)

第二版
新年快乐 – 运程好坏自晓得
只要有钱健康能唱歌
便能翻山越岭过大河
(没有淌不过的水,过不去的河)


Grace Liu
Canada
Local time: 16:57
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Chinese
PRO pts in category: 8

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Su Hong: Nice! I like the second one better.
17 hrs
  -> Thanks,Hong! It sounds like a doggerel. lol
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50 days   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
peotry translation
见解释栏内翻译


Explanation:
新年好-- 是福是祸自有命中定下,
只要健康快乐有银子花,
什么都不用怕!

jennygzq
United States
Local time: 16:57
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Native speaker of: Native in ChineseChinese
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55 days   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
peotry translation
七言绝句版


Explanation:
贺新年,
好运厄运会知晓,
身体健康精神爽,
财源滚滚聚门前,
万事皆空何所惧!

因为是诗歌的翻译,所以我运用了七言古诗的翻译形式。原诗诙谐幽默,在第三句enough money的地方是一个转折,表现了其贪心,说明有钱最重要,

SophieT
United States
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Native speaker of: Chinese
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