freshly made baking and manufacturing of pastries, pastries and chocolate
French translation: production/fabrication artisanal et cuisson de pâtisseries, viennoiseries et chocol
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17:27 Sep 6, 2006
English to French translations [PRO] Food & Drink
English term or phrase:freshly made baking and manufacturing of pastries, pastries and chocolate
The proprietary mark has been used for more than X years for the operation of the fine bakery, pastry and chocolate manufacturing known in Switzerland, particularly for its famous "Freshly Made baking and manufacturing of pastries, pastries and chocolate"
la répétition de pastries doit être une erreur, c'est pourtant écrit ainsi dans mon texte !
merci pour vos idées !
The structure of the sentence and words used lead me to believe that the text for first translated from german to english by a non-native and/or amateur translator or a machine (eeeek!). Maybe you should ask for the original text in german and check...
The English is terrible: "the operation of fine ... chocolate manufaturing", inconsistent capitalisation in the famous saying... we don't manufacture pastries in English. Saying it twice won't change that! I'd query the client on this one.
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25 mins confidence: peer agreement (net): +2
production/fabrication artisanal et cuisson de pâtisseries, viennoiseries et chocol
Explanation: Renommé pour sa “production/fabrication artisanal et cuisson de pâtisseries, viennoiseries et chocolats frais”
Une idée…however, I agree the original English leaves much to be desired
Bailatjones Switzerland Local time: 10:00 Works in field Native speaker of: English PRO pts in category: 4
45 mins confidence:
Connue pour ses pâtisseries et viennoiseries sortant du
Explanation: four ainsi que ses chocolats élaborés sur place
chaplin United Kingdom Local time: 09:00 Native speaker of: French PRO pts in category: 10