close-up view ... too close

Portuguese translation: vista de perto...perto demais

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English term or phrase:	close-up view ... too close
Portuguese translation:	vista de perto...perto demais
Entered by:	Oliveira Simões

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14:51 Feb 9, 2018

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Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / adult romance book

English term or phrase: close-up view ... too close

Raven está descrevendo os movimentos que faz como parte da dança no colo (lap dance).

Then, I arched my back, and rotated my torso, holding a position that put my ass in the air and gave him a close-up view of my cleavage. Too close."

Pensei em traduzir "gave him a close-up view" como "lhe dava um 'close'", mas obviamente isso dificultaria a tradução da expressão seguinte ("too close"), em que a autora obviamente está fazendo um jogo de palavras. Ao mesmo tempo, penso que uma tradução literal de "close-up view" não cai bem. O que os colegas opinam?

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vista de perto...perto demais

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vista de perto...perto demais

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Nick Taylor
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vista de perto...perto demais

Nick Taylor

plano aproximado / demasiado próximo

Mariana Vieira

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plano aproximado / demasiado próximo

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Uma sugestão.

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Ou "vista privilegiada", "demasiado privilegiada"?

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