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13:19 Sep 10, 2000
French to English translations [PRO]
Bus/Financial
French term or phrase: pour les véhicules qui n’étaient pas neufs au départ de la location
Pour les véhicules qui n’étaient pas neufs au départ de la location, Hertz Lease procédera lors de leur restitution, à leur cession sur le marché professionnel
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Claire
Claire
English translation:See below
Explanation:
Hi, Claire.

I'd suggest this:

In the case of used cars that were subsequently leased, Hertz Lease plans to dispose of them thru professional used car channels once they reach the end of their leasing period and are returned.

Regards,
Deb
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Debora Blake
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Summary of answers provided
nasee below
Nikki Scott-Despaigne
naSee below
Debora Blake
naVehicles etc.Jennifer White
naUpon the return at the end of their lease period of vehicles that were ...
Yolanda Broad


  

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1 hr
Upon the return at the end of their lease period of vehicles that were ...


Explanation:
Upon the return at the end of their lease period of vehicles that were not rented new, Hertz Lease will proceed to dispose of them on the professional market.

I can see where the English phrasing of this French sentence might have given you pause--it really is convoluted!

Yolanda Broad
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PRO pts in pair: 1551

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Heathcliff
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1 hr
Vehicles etc.


Explanation:
As for the vehicles which were not new when they were rented out, when they are returned, Hertz Lease will dispose of them at the car auctions.

The translation given by the first translator is just not English, I think this is what we would say.

Jennifer White
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10 hrs
See below


Explanation:
Hi, Claire.

I'd suggest this:

In the case of used cars that were subsequently leased, Hertz Lease plans to dispose of them thru professional used car channels once they reach the end of their leasing period and are returned.

Regards,
Deb

Debora Blake
France
Local time: 07:00
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in FrenchFrench
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Nikki Scott-Despaigne
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17 hrs
see below


Explanation:
In respect of vehicles which were not new at the beginning of the lease period, HL shall lease same back onto the professional vehicle market upon their return.

OR

Hertz Lease shall lease back onto the professional market vehicles which were not new at the beginning of the lease period when such vehicles are recovered upon expiry of the lease.

I agree with Yolanda, convoluted! My second version does not take into account the "pour" at the beginning. However, if one thing is clear, it is the type of vehicles they are talking about!!!

cession = transfer, assignment
faire cession de qqchs = tranfer/assign sthng
cession-bail = lease back

Nikki


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Nikki Scott-Despaigne
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