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La vision que nous partageons en commun de créer...

English translation: The visions we all share to create...

13:08 Aug 28, 2008
French to English translations [Non-PRO]
General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters
French term or phrase: La vision que nous partageons en commun de créer...
I simply said "our common vision to organise" but I'm not quite satisfied
Can someone help with a more suitable translation?

Thanks
mimi 254
Local time: 20:53
English translation:The visions we all share to create...
Explanation:
that's what I would say

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Note added at 4 mins (2008-08-28 13:13:05 GMT)
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Oops, typo, vision, not visions - sorry
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berg
United Kingdom
Local time: 20:53
Grading comment
Merci!
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
4 +6The visions we all share to create...
berg
4 +3the vision we share is to create.../our shared vision is to create...
Adam Lankamer
4 +1We share a common vision to create
lundy
3We have a shared vision/we have a vision in common to create/produce
Helen Shiner


Discussion entries: 1





  

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3 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +3
the vision we share is to create.../our shared vision is to create...


Explanation:
hth

Adam Lankamer
Poland
Local time: 21:53
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in PolishPolish

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Jean-Claude Gouin
6 hrs
agree  sdavidson: Our shared vision is to .... definitely sounds better!
23 hrs
agree  Helen Shiner: With Shelley
1 day 3 hrs
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3 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +6
The visions we all share to create...


Explanation:
that's what I would say

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Note added at 4 mins (2008-08-28 13:13:05 GMT)
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Oops, typo, vision, not visions - sorry

berg
United Kingdom
Local time: 20:53
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 8
Grading comment
Merci!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  kimadil
1 min
  -> Thanks kimadil
agree  Sandra Petch: Yes, or just as an alternative, our joint vision or our shared vision to create (whatever they are going to create).
9 mins
  -> Thanks Sandra
agree  Jean-Louis S.
27 mins
  -> Thanks jlsjr
agree  emiledgar
5 hrs
  -> Thanks Emile
agree  Helen Shiner: But vision singular not plural
1 day 3 hrs
  -> Yes, thanks Helen, I realised as soon as I had posted - check note
agree  B D Finch: Yes, I only just saw that you'd changed it to singular. It looked somewhat religious before.
1 day 6 hrs
  -> Thanks B D Indeed it did, just a typo really
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5 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
We share a common vision to create


Explanation:
not having the whole sentence it's difficult, but I would be tempted to turn this around if possible

lundy
France
Local time: 21:53
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 36

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Helen Shiner: Also good
22 hrs
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1 day 3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
We have a shared vision/we have a vision in common to create/produce


Explanation:
A slight rewording...

Helen Shiner
United Kingdom
Local time: 20:53
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 44
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