est bien le sien puis communique

English translation: is indeed his. Then...

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09:35 Dec 2, 2010
French to English translations [Non-PRO]
Bus/Financial - General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters / website terms and conditions
French term or phrase: est bien le sien puis communique
I'm having trouble with this sentence and have the feeling that there is a mistake in it somewhere. Any suggestions most appreciated. Thanks.

"A cette fin, le client confirme qu'il est le titulaire de la carte bancaire à débiter et que le nom figurant sur cette carte bancaire est bien le sien puis communique dans un environnement sécurisé sur le site de notre partenaire de paiement, le numéro à seize chiffres et la date d'expiration figurant au recto de sa carte bancaire, ainsi que les numéros du cryptogramme visuel figurant au verso de sa carte bancaire."
Thomas Roberts
English translation:is indeed his. Then...
Explanation:
In my opinion, the translation requires a little reordering. Therefore, I would suggest the following:

...the client confirms that he is the holder of the bank card to be debited and that the name thereon is indeed his. Then, through a secure environment on our payment partner's site, he provides the 16-digit number and expiration date that appear on the front of his bank card as well as...
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is indeed his. Then...


Explanation:
In my opinion, the translation requires a little reordering. Therefore, I would suggest the following:

...the client confirms that he is the holder of the bank card to be debited and that the name thereon is indeed his. Then, through a secure environment on our payment partner's site, he provides the 16-digit number and expiration date that appear on the front of his bank card as well as...

Kristin Kamm
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Local time: 21:54
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