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...tant s'impose la lumière...

English translation: so compelling is the radiance

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23:32 Sep 4, 2011
French to English translations [Non-PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / Archaic Greek poetry
French term or phrase: ...tant s'impose la lumière...
'Du point de vue sémantique, la beauté de la jeune fille est à nouveau verbalement perçue dans la lumière de son éclat : chevelure comme de l’or pur et visage d’argent ; ces comparaisons dispensent finalement le chœur de poursuivre son évocation « transparente » (diaphádan, vers 56) tant s’impose la lumière de la chorège.'

My translation at the moment is: 'From the semantic point of view, the beauty of the young girl is once again verbally perceived in the light of its brilliance: tresses like pure gold and a face of silver; these comparisons finally exempt the choir from pursuing its 'transparent' (diaphádan, line 56) evocation, so brilliant is the light of the chorus-leader.' I don't know what this means, though maybe that is the fault of the French rather than the English.
xxxJames Kierst
United States
Local time: 23:26
English translation:so compelling is the radiance
Explanation:
or something to that effect.
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Sandra& Kenneth
Israel
Local time: 09:26
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3 +1so compelling is the radiance
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so compelling is the radiance


Explanation:
or something to that effect.

Sandra& Kenneth
Israel
Local time: 09:26
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in RomanianRomanian
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