Débutant ? Vétéran ? Pour le plaisir ou la compétition ? etc..
English translation: Whether you're just a beginner...
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old wave dog / still finding your legs... Explanation: Its advertising copy so don't be afraid to be a little creative. Forceful, even. Personally, I find the original text a little flat. How about something like: Are you still finding your legs or do you haul your gear down to the bay every weekend and pray for wind? Whether you're just having fun, you're gunning for first place, its your first time out, or you're looking to nail that Spock 540 down just right, [insert boring part of the copy here] The "Spock 540", in case you were wondering, is an expert move. |
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Novice? Old hand? For pleasure or sport? Explanation: I'm not sure if "sport" sounds sufficiently competitive for your needs. Alternative: "competition" Instead of "old hand" you could put "experienced" or even "veteran" |
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Just starting out or already an old hand? Just for fun or for competition? Explanation: ... |
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peer agreement (net): +5Whether you're just a beginner... Explanation: ... or have years of experience, whether you're out for fun or out to win, we have the right course for you, from initiation to competition level for all ages from 5 up, all year round.. etc etc I fuly agree with Cheungmo's approach: don't just stick to the question format. This idea isn't as "go get'em" as Cheungmo's - and I haven't a clue about watersports - but it might give you some ideas. |
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