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18:54 Mar 3, 2010 |
German to English translations [PRO] Marketing - Computers: Hardware / cash register technology | |||||
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What one can get through a big, brilliant screen experience... Explanation: I would drop the coma between big and brilliant |
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The things one can see (experience) on a big, brilliant screen Explanation: IMHO |
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Experience a big and brilliant screen with ... Explanation: ...the intelligent ...QT660... I'd prefer a more direct approach. For a register even the German is a bit too poetic for my taste. Considering English is usually more direct and shamelessly singing the praises of a product, you should have plenty of leeway. As an aside - unless there is some fingerprint ID for the waiters involved (highly unlikely), I'd probably forego that in the translation and stick with the old-fashioned "touch of a finger" |
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all the things that can be experienced on a big, bright screen Explanation: Hi Rachel. Just another suggestion, and I might've made the sentence more active by recasting it along these lines: The well-designed Touch Kasse QT-6600 enhances all the things that can be experienced on a big, bright screen. |
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all possibilities a large bright touch screen can offer Explanation: from the context you offer, I can see that this is about touch screen technology. so why not call it by its name? :) |
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