Aufnahme der operativen Geschäftstätigkeit des Börsenhandels über die EEX

English translation: start of active business operations of the stock market via the EEX

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German term or phrase:Aufnahme der operativen Geschäftstätigkeit des Börsenhandels über die EEX
English translation:start of active business operations of the stock market via the EEX
Entered by: Steffen Walter

10:41 Jul 4, 2000
German to English translations [PRO]
Bus/Financial - Investment / Securities
German term or phrase: Aufnahme der operativen Geschäftstätigkeit des Börsenhandels über die EEX
One last question: I am having trouble rendering this in English: Eine deutliche Ausweitung des Energiehandelsgeschaftes wird voraussichtlich mit der Aufnahme der operativen Geschaeftstaetigkeit des Boersenshandels ueber die EEX eintreten. I just cannot get past "Aufnahme der operativen Geschaeftstaetigkeit des Boersenshandels ueber die EEX . It seems to be doppeltgemoppelt!! ANy assistance would be greatly appreciated.
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Explanation:
I agree that operative Geschäftstätigkeit is doppeltgemoppelt. Here's my suggestion: "A marked expansion of the energy trade business [I want to use utility something here, but cannot find the right term] will probably begin starting with operations of the stock market via the EEX." This should get you over your writers block at least :->
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Dierk Seeburg
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Thanks a lot! You did indeed help me overcome my translator's block.
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Explanation:
I agree that operative Geschäftstätigkeit is doppeltgemoppelt. Here's my suggestion: "A marked expansion of the energy trade business [I want to use utility something here, but cannot find the right term] will probably begin starting with operations of the stock market via the EEX." This should get you over your writers block at least :->

Dierk Seeburg
Local time: 17:42
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Thanks a lot! You did indeed help me overcome my translator's block.
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Explanation:
Yes, it does seem redundant. I would suggest translating it as "... at/with the start of active business operations of the stock exchange via EEX." This would distinguish it from passive operations (planning for launch, start-up management, etc) which seems to me to be what the author intended. Hope this helps, Will

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