13:00 Oct 24, 2007 |
German to English translations [PRO] Marketing - Advertising / Public Relations / Slogan | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Sheila Owens Local time: 12:18 | ||||||
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5 | More variety at the breakfast table |
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3 | They'll spice up your breakfast buffet! |
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3 | Look what's new for breakfast! |
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2 | they enhance your breakfast buffet |
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they enhance your breakfast buffet Explanation: or better: go with your second suggestion: they make for more variety at your breakfast buffet not for points |
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They'll spice up your breakfast buffet! Explanation: maybe... |
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More variety at the breakfast table Explanation: I think that "They will make for....." is superfluous. Keep it short and snappy. I use breakfast table which I feel is more usually used in the UK than breakfast buffet (or maybe that is simply a reflection of my rather hasty morning routine with children!) |
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Look what's new for breakfast! Explanation: If its a headline and that much freedom is allowed -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr (2007-10-24 14:07:03 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- oder For more choice at the breakfast buffet! |
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