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17:42 Nov 4, 2008
German to English translations [PRO]
Bus/Financial - Business/Commerce (general)
German term or phrase: deutlich geringer ausfallen
This phrase occurs within the sentence:
'Bei X, fiel der geplante Abbau aufgrund der weiteren Zentralisierung mit 8% deutlich geringer aus als bei den Tochtergesellschaften'.

I have translated this sentence into English as follows and would like to know if I have translated 'deutlich geringer ausfallen' correctly. Many thanks.

'At X, the planned downsizing had a considerably lesser impact at 8% than at the subsidiaries due to the further centralisation'.
Sarah Port
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3was significantly lower
suew


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was significantly lower


Explanation:
Not sure about using "impact" here, with its various connotations. How about: "As a result of further centralisation, actual headcount reduction - of 8% - at X was significantly lower than at the subsidiaries."? i.e. straight reporting.

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