09:45 May 10, 2002 |
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| Selected response from: Mary Worby United Kingdom Local time: 12:56 | ||||||
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4 +9 | ... rephrase ... |
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5 | cross-company |
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5 | company-wide... |
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4 | team composed of members of all plants |
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4 | company-wide |
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4 -1 | rephrase |
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4 -1 | plant-independent |
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cross-company Explanation: might be one suggestion that could help |
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company-wide... Explanation: ...ODER group-wide team (falls es sich um einen Konzern handelt) wäre eine Alternative, um die Bedeutung "standortübergreifend" auszudrücken HTH -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2002-05-10 10:10:38 (GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Yes, team should comprise representatives of all the plants/sites, which is IMHO conveyed by \"company-wide\". In contrast, \"intra-plant\" sounds as if only one plant is considered. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2002-05-10 10:11:47 (GMT) -------------------------------------------------- ... as in \"intra-plant processes\" for example |
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rephrase Explanation: ein Werks-übergreifendes Team definiert, welches sich um die Beschreibung von einheitlichen Abläufen in den Werken kümmern wird. ein Team definiert, welches sich um die Beschreibung von einheitlichen Abläufen in ALLEN Werken kümmern wird. Just a suggestion, as "cross-company" sounds strange to me. |
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plant-independent Explanation: common processes to be used in all plants |
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... rephrase ... Explanation: I agree that rephrasing is probably your best option here. For the production division, a project team is being set up made up of members from various different plants/works in order to define consistent processes across the sites. Just a first shot at it, but none of the usual options seem to fit here )-: HTH Mary |
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