21:53 Apr 26, 2005 |
Italian to English translations [Non-PRO] Certificates, Diplomas, Licenses, CVs / CV | |||||||
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4 | I had the chance for internal growth, resulting in a leading role ... |
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I had the chance for internal growth, resulting in a leading role ... Explanation: I suggest that you need to modify the sentence from "I happened to gradually gain...." which is not correct English in the first place. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 3 hrs 50 mins (2005-04-27 01:43:30 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- good luck and good night! -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 4 hrs 12 mins (2005-04-27 02:05:28 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- correction: I had the chance for internal advancement......... \"internal growth\" could be misunderstood e.g. as bodily growth and advancement is a better word in terms of career. |
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