come il ciclone sta al sospiro di una mosca

English translation: like a hurricane beside a gentle breeze

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Italian term or phrase:come il ciclone sta al sospiro di una mosca
English translation:like a hurricane beside a gentle breeze
Entered by: philgoddard

20:14 Nov 19, 2013
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Italian term or phrase: come il ciclone sta al sospiro di una mosca
Contesto:

Mussolini era certamente più geniale di Francisco Franco. Aveva una fantasia mille volte superiore a quella del Caudillo. Il suo tempramento stava a quello di Franco come il ciclone sta al sospiro di una mosca.

Anything better that "just about totally overpowering"?

Grazie,

Barbara
Barbara Cochran, MFA
United States
Local time: 07:43
like a hurricane beside a gentle breeze
Explanation:
I think a literal translation of "sospiro di una mosca" would sound a bit odd, but you can still keep the idea of wind.

You could say "His temperament was a hurricane to Franco's gentle breeze".
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philgoddard
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Summary of answers provided
4 +2like a hurricane beside a gentle breeze
philgoddard
5 +1as a tornado is to the sigh of a fly.
Dr Lofthouse
4His nature was a cyclone next to Franco's slight breeze
Janice Giffin
3as a hurricane compares to the breath of a fly
cynthiatesser


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like a hurricane beside a gentle breeze


Explanation:
I think a literal translation of "sospiro di una mosca" would sound a bit odd, but you can still keep the idea of wind.

You could say "His temperament was a hurricane to Franco's gentle breeze".

philgoddard
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agree  Wendy Streitparth: Prefer the second option, with perhaps "like" a hurricane
8 mins
  -> Yes, that's a possibility. Thanks.

agree  Grazia Brunello
1 hr

neutral  Janice Giffin: Using the word 'gentle' next to Franco's name suggests a wrong connotation (to me).
4 hrs

neutral  giuseppina franich: I would skip translating"franco's gentle breeze"
12 hrs

neutral  Michael Korovkin: with Janice and Giuseppina
12 hrs
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4 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
His nature was a cyclone next to Franco's slight breeze


Explanation:
another suggestion

Janice Giffin
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as a tornado is to the sigh of a fly.


Explanation:
'..his temperament in comparison to Franco's was as a tornado compared to the sigh of a fly'

Dr Lofthouse
France
Local time: 12:43
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agree  Shera Lyn Parpia: The original is so picturesque, it would be a shame to change it.
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as a hurricane compares to the breath of a fly


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Note added at 11 hrs (2013-11-20 07:42:10 GMT)
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I do not think flies can sigh; sopsiro here must mean breath

cynthiatesser
Italy
Local time: 13:43
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Native speaker of: Italian
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neutral  Mark: I’m not sure that they "breathe" either. Apparently insects don't have lungs. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Insect#Respiratory_and_circulat... It'll be figurative.
54 mins
  -> Some flatulence, perhaps? :-)
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